How many people died in car accident because of speed?
Speeding is a very serious problem ,most people in UAE drive their car fast without considering the consequences . They do not only danger their life but also other people life .The highest percentage of died people in UAE is caused by speed . This essay will show two main reasons and two main solution for this problem .
Speeding is a very serious problem ,most people in UAE drive their car fast without considering the consequences . They do not only danger their life but also other people life .The highest percentage of died people in UAE is caused by speed . This essay will show two main reasons and two main solution for this problem .
This introduction is ok and would probably get a 3 or 4 out of 5. A few problems: 1) why is there a space between the first and second sentences? 2) there should be a full stop between problem and most in the second sentence. 3) 'danger' is the wrong word form here. 4) the 4th sentence should be part of the second. it's more specific than the third sentence, and would therefore make a better part one of the bridge.
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